I did *try* to get her style down, but it's as painful and confusing to write as it is to read. Making the italicized summary of what she would have put in (physical descriptions, redundant backstory, etc.) was the best I could bring myself to do.

He is! The idea of what male!Melanie would be like was a really striking image for me, the most of the gender-swapped lot in fact, so I really wanted to do something with him especially =D