http://writtenelision.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] writtenelision.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] a_sporking_rat 2013-10-20 06:37 pm (UTC)

I'd be happy to help if you need a beta. You already know I love your writing.

And now on to my commentary on this...

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Sorry. The bile and revulsion that has been building in regards to this entire matter came to a head. My apologies.

In a more coherent fashion... I write with a number of characters who really would completely lose it and go on a killing spree if the one they loved was killed. It is mentioned, and made clear in the story, that this is not healthy. It is romantic. In the same way ripping someone's heart out to give it to your valentine is.

I would like to submit, for consideration, that sometime during the first three books, Anita took brain damage. The entire series from that point on is the result of her incapacitated mind taking her on a glorious trip through fantasy land, where she could do whatever she wanted without consequences. Meanwhile her body is in a hospital bed, and there is a steady beeping filling the room. And sometime soon, that will be revealed. And we will all be awed by LKH's long running dedication to this glorious farce.

That all assumes that we're living in the Twilight Zone.

In reality, I weep for the lost potential.

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