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I like the division between 'supernormal' and 'supernatural' that she's set up. We've already seen that supernatural creatures are second class citizens, so by placing other magical beings as similar to them but separate from them, you've built up a system of segregation Wow, I didn't think of it that way!
I can see Smith associating Vaudun with zombies and zombie raising with his bad grandmother so that they all get intertwined with one another. Augh, see, that's a problem I keep running in to---I'm so used to the opinions of characters being hers/objective fact that the idea that this once it might not be never even occurs to me DX
LKH means the stilettos that she was stuck in because they had a strap on them strong enough to support the weight of her body, which lead up to her flashing the whole room? She kicked off those shoes? Ahahahaha, I didn't even spot this, but you're right!
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I like the division between 'supernormal' and 'supernatural' that she's set up. We've already seen that supernatural creatures are second class citizens, so by placing other magical beings as similar to them but separate from them, you've built up a system of segregation
Wow, I didn't think of it that way!
I can see Smith associating Vaudun with zombies and zombie raising with his bad grandmother so that they all get intertwined with one another.
Augh, see, that's a problem I keep running in to---I'm so used to the opinions of characters being hers/objective fact that the idea that this once it might not be never even occurs to me DX
LKH means the stilettos that she was stuck in because they had a strap on them strong enough to support the weight of her body, which lead up to her flashing the whole room? She kicked off those shoes?
Ahahahaha, I didn't even spot this, but you're right!