My husband's 37 and not circumcised. So Nicky not being circumcised isn't a problem -- it's not like being 5 feet wide. But I also have no idea what LKH is trying to convey regarding "loose skin" and "smoother hardness". If Nicky's hard, his foreskin isn't "loose".

I also don't see what shaving has to do with it. The way it's written, she wouldn't be licking him if he shaved. I wonder if LKH knows what the word "so" means. Nothing about this scene makes sense.