So sad to hear about Sam. I hope she gets through this.
"I want to be inside a different place" LKH is just incapable of writing dirty talk, isn't she? LKH, your readers are not going to have a fit of the vapours if one of your characters says pussy or cunt while having sex.
"Dance for me." That is creepy. There's a short online game called Loved which is... hard to describe, really, but it's sort of an allegory about an abusive relationship. Every so often in it you get asked questions, and one of them was Do I own your body or your mind? And if you chose body, the response was Dance for me.
I know there's no way that was an intentional reference from LKH, it's just... creepy.
The cocoon of flesh thing reminds me of body horror things in the Merry Gentry series. Not what LKH was going for, I hope.
"In trying to keep the Devil to himself, Asher had made certain he wouldn't be able to keep him at all." Hmm. Something about that pings me as her putting her faults on Asher, but I can't tell what or why.
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"I want to be inside a different place"
LKH is just incapable of writing dirty talk, isn't she? LKH, your readers are not going to have a fit of the vapours if one of your characters says pussy or cunt while having sex.
"Dance for me."
That is creepy. There's a short online game called Loved which is... hard to describe, really, but it's sort of an allegory about an abusive relationship. Every so often in it you get asked questions, and one of them was Do I own your body or your mind? And if you chose body, the response was Dance for me.
I know there's no way that was an intentional reference from LKH, it's just... creepy.
The cocoon of flesh thing reminds me of body horror things in the Merry Gentry series. Not what LKH was going for, I hope.
"In trying to keep the Devil to himself, Asher had made certain he wouldn't be able to keep him at all."
Hmm. Something about that pings me as her putting her faults on Asher, but I can't tell what or why.