Date: 2013-01-23 11:13 pm (UTC)
I knew his body was happy to be pressed against mine

I think I might hate LKH's use of that phrase even more than "bad guys." Honestly, who the fuck would say that in a context like this? It's so cutesy. Maybe acceptable to say to someone when you're going to have sex with them, if you're being flirty/silly. Absolutely ridiculous when you're trying to fight your kidnappers and save the lives of the men you allegedly love. I suppose LKH is going for sardonic, but it just comes off as stupid.

I somehow missed that Tony left the room at some point here, and I was imagining him watching this whole thing with a what the actual fuck look on his face. I just put it down to bad writing that he hadn't said a word. I'm almost disappointed to find I was wrong, because it was a funny visual.
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