FLIRT, CHAPTER FOUR, PART ONE
Jan. 14th, 2013 07:56 pmIn addition to the usual snark, I also have to good things to say about this chapter. Firstly, it's 30 pages long, I had to split this spork into three parts. That made sporking take forever, yes, but it's commendable, because LKH has a bad habit of often making tiny chapters of a few pages for some reason, splitting one scene into several little chapters for no reason. This is one scene in one chapter, and it's a nice long one (hurr hurr) that doesn't snap the reader out of it with any breaks. The other good thing to say is that we get action (somewhat) and we get plot.
( FLIRT, CHAPTER FOUR, PART 1 in which it finally gets interesting )
( FLIRT, CHAPTER FOUR, PART 1 in which it finally gets interesting )