And now Wander understands why Wander didn't get to go play (besides blowing things up) and Max did~
I feel like Wander, Pryderi, and Sig would get along fabulously with the whole burning stone and blowing things up bit, even if Sig doesn't usually have that urge. Yes. (Also, foxes are so damn cute I cannot even DX)
I love how well thought-out and developed this is. The plot is moving, there's intrigue, character development... even some humor in places where it's appropriate and it relieves the tension of the politics. It's perfect~
You did spell "unfortunately" wrong somewhere. I think where you were talking about Rowan being gender-fluid and having a she-day but being required to dress and act the he part. Aside from that, everything else was perfect :D
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Date: 2013-05-10 11:59 pm (UTC)I feel like Wander, Pryderi, and Sig would get along fabulously with the whole burning stone and blowing things up bit, even if Sig doesn't usually have that urge. Yes. (Also, foxes are so damn cute I cannot even DX)
I love how well thought-out and developed this is. The plot is moving, there's intrigue, character development... even some humor in places where it's appropriate and it relieves the tension of the politics. It's perfect~
You did spell "unfortunately" wrong somewhere. I think where you were talking about Rowan being gender-fluid and having a she-day but being required to dress and act the he part. Aside from that, everything else was perfect :D