He stops to tell Asher that "You taste close." Is that something you can actually taste? Precum, I guess, that's a thing, right?
I don't want to over-share, but yeah, you can kinda tell when someone is getting close when giving them head. When a guy is close to ejaculating, there is more precum, so I guess Meph is talking about the saltiness. But, knowing LKH, the boytoys' jizz probably tastes like rainbows and chocolate chip cookies. I'm also not sure why she focuses on taste. Close to ejaculation, a man's penis starts to swell and get harder, so it's probably easier to 'feel' when a man is close rather than taste (I hope I didn't squick anyone out, my apologies if I did).
Anita continuously says "between my legs" in this chapter to mean vagina and it keeps making me think of just literally the empty spot between two legs.
I find it humorous how LKH likes to go on about how hardcore and edgy her books and sex scenes are, yet she goes out of her way to avoid saying 'vagina' and 'penis.' She uses the same flowery euphemisms that you could find in any other bodice-ripper at the Wal-mart.
Meph comments on how tight Anita is, and Micah assures him that "the first time is amazing" with Anita.
Ignoring the fail about how Anita would remain tight after constant, non-stop sex with monster dicks (maybe it's another super-power); this part right completely sums up Anita's role in sex and how the other men view her when it comes to sex. Every time someone new has sex with Anita they comment on how tight she is, every time she has sex there is an over emphasis placed on her 'tightness.' It's not about her, it's all about what the men are feeling as they use her for their pleasure. Throughout this entire sex scene we read the other men positioning her ("used my body as a happy shield."), and talking about her as if she is some sort of object for their sexual gratification. She's so tight and wet and they love the way it feels when they have sex with her. Sex is about giving another person pleasure, but here Anita does nothing but lie around and let the others move her and 'shove' things into her, she brings nothing and adds nothing to this, she is just an object lying there as they bang her. I don't understand why they consider her to be so good at sex when she does nothing.
Add the eerie emphasis on how 'tight' she is, along with her breasts, the two most important 'traits' she brings to sex. Considering how she likes to have sex with new and 'virginal' men, it makes me think that there is some sort of virgin fetish here. Anita is always tight, as tight as any virgin. The value of Anita when it comes to sex is purely based on her physical body, her 'tightness' and her big breasts. It's not about skill or anything she actually does, it's all about these physical traits. The focus on the 'tightness' is particularly unnerving as it plays back into how women have to remain virginal for their one true loves/husbands, because once they have sex their vaginas become useless and broken and sex won't be as pleasurable for their husbands. Anita is essentially a perpetual virgin, we see the other men focus on how 'innocent' she is, how the sex is all about true love and it's all meant to be and she has to do it, and then add this magic power she has to keep her vagina perfect and tight for every lover....and actually the virgin fetish would explain why Anita acts like an object during sex. She's not necessarily an object, she's the virgin lying back and doing her wifely duty by letting her husband use her as he will, and in turn she gains pleasure by submitting.
"Micah's body danced behind me as his body grew hard and wet against me."
The imagery this sentence conjures makes me smile, maybe because I imagine Micah doing the Carlton dance against Anita's back as she moans.
"So your twin sister is Angel and you're Devil?"
The names in these books are so stupid it makes my head hurt.
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Date: 2013-07-02 06:21 pm (UTC)I don't want to over-share, but yeah, you can kinda tell when someone is getting close when giving them head. When a guy is close to ejaculating, there is more precum, so I guess Meph is talking about the saltiness. But, knowing LKH, the boytoys' jizz probably tastes like rainbows and chocolate chip cookies. I'm also not sure why she focuses on taste. Close to ejaculation, a man's penis starts to swell and get harder, so it's probably easier to 'feel' when a man is close rather than taste (I hope I didn't squick anyone out, my apologies if I did).
Anita continuously says "between my legs" in this chapter to mean vagina and it keeps making me think of just literally the empty spot between two legs.
I find it humorous how LKH likes to go on about how hardcore and edgy her books and sex scenes are, yet she goes out of her way to avoid saying 'vagina' and 'penis.' She uses the same flowery euphemisms that you could find in any other bodice-ripper at the Wal-mart.
Meph comments on how tight Anita is, and Micah assures him that "the first time is amazing" with Anita.
Ignoring the fail about how Anita would remain tight after constant, non-stop sex with monster dicks (maybe it's another super-power); this part right completely sums up Anita's role in sex and how the other men view her when it comes to sex. Every time someone new has sex with Anita they comment on how tight she is, every time she has sex there is an over emphasis placed on her 'tightness.' It's not about her, it's all about what the men are feeling as they use her for their pleasure. Throughout this entire sex scene we read the other men positioning her ("used my body as a happy shield."), and talking about her as if she is some sort of object for their sexual gratification. She's so tight and wet and they love the way it feels when they have sex with her. Sex is about giving another person pleasure, but here Anita does nothing but lie around and let the others move her and 'shove' things into her, she brings nothing and adds nothing to this, she is just an object lying there as they bang her. I don't understand why they consider her to be so good at sex when she does nothing.
Add the eerie emphasis on how 'tight' she is, along with her breasts, the two most important 'traits' she brings to sex. Considering how she likes to have sex with new and 'virginal' men, it makes me think that there is some sort of virgin fetish here. Anita is always tight, as tight as any virgin. The value of Anita when it comes to sex is purely based on her physical body, her 'tightness' and her big breasts. It's not about skill or anything she actually does, it's all about these physical traits. The focus on the 'tightness' is particularly unnerving as it plays back into how women have to remain virginal for their one true loves/husbands, because once they have sex their vaginas become useless and broken and sex won't be as pleasurable for their husbands. Anita is essentially a perpetual virgin, we see the other men focus on how 'innocent' she is, how the sex is all about true love and it's all meant to be and she has to do it, and then add this magic power she has to keep her vagina perfect and tight for every lover....and actually the virgin fetish would explain why Anita acts like an object during sex. She's not necessarily an object, she's the virgin lying back and doing her wifely duty by letting her husband use her as he will, and in turn she gains pleasure by submitting.
"Micah's body danced behind me as his body grew hard and wet against me."
The imagery this sentence conjures makes me smile, maybe because I imagine Micah doing the Carlton dance against Anita's back as she moans.
"So your twin sister is Angel and you're Devil?"
The names in these books are so stupid it makes my head hurt.