This is a lot easier to read than LKH's stuff because it's so much better-written, too. I don't think you're capable of writing as badly as LKH; I am often impressed with how terrible she is able to get in pursuit of wordcount. Also you skip the overlong descriptions. And have a sense of humor. And morality, as already discussed.
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Date: 2013-10-01 06:13 pm (UTC)Melanthios is hot XD.