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Literally nothing happened in this chapter either. I would say at least Petronia was in it, but that's ruined by the fact she's now fawning over Quinn like everyone else. Because even the bad guy has to be in love with him and think he's great.

CHAPTER 37
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Well, we lost Rocket too :C His kidneys were failing and I had to have him put to sleep. Amethyst also passed away due to old age. Amethyst I'm fine with, she lived a full life and wasn't in pain, but I'm really upset about Rocket. I started this year with eight rats, and now I'm down to three. I've been keeping rats for around 15 years and I have just NEVER had an epidemic like this, man :C

Anyway, here is a very short spork. I'm sorry, there just really was not much to work with and I didn't want to do the work of line-by-line quoting DX

BLACKWOOD FARM, CHAPTER 36

When Quinn returns, Jasmine has a three year old son with blond hair and blue eyes named Jerome. He is thankfully described as “Anglo-African” rather than “mulatto” or something like that, which I was bracing myself for given that Jasmine was described as a quadroon. Quinn is too stupid to realize Jerome is his and Jasmine has to tell him. When he tries to smooch with Jasmine again, she pushes him away, telling him there's been enough of that as he well knows. Also Jerome's middle name is Tarquin and Quinn finds him to be "verbally very far advanced" cuz everyone related to Quinn is smart.

When Quinn tells Aunt Queen---despite Jasmine wanting him not to---Aunt Queen is delighted and has a toast. I'm surprised by this. I know that Rice would never ever have the gall or the understanding of complexity to dare make a good guy character be racist, but...I dunno, I feel like, if not her race, Aunt Queen would at least have a problem with her class? I mean really, Quinn, the help? Not that rich men haven't always done that, but it's never been something that the women in their family were typically pleased about. And if she's not upset with Quinn---which admittedly, I could see, she doesn't seem like she could ever blame Quinn for anything EXCEPT being rude to a guest---what about Jasmine? A grown woman who is at least in her thirties, sleeping with a teenager whom she practically raised/knew since his infancy? I'd be appalled and furious at that for sure if I were AQ. Especially given how she infantilizes Quinn. But, hey, god forbid there's conflict, god forbid any of the “good” guys ever have a problem with each other, everything is fine!

Quinn gives Terry Sue all the twenties he has on him so Tommy can stay a Blackwood Manor. Terry Sue has a new baby, and Quinn sure to note that the previous baby was not fathered by Pops as he suspected, less we forget Terry Sue is a slut. Brittany is now a “slender and beautiful” teenager.

Mona too sick to see Quinn, even to email or phone him. Quinn asks Michael if he can send flowers, Michael says yes but be sure to put Ophelia Immortal on the card. I am surprised that Mona shared this intimate nickname with anyone else, especially adult guardian. It seems like a very un-teenage thing to do. But judging these two by anything close to normal teenage standards is admittedly futile. Also, while Ophelia Immortal was her name with Quinn specifically, she clearly does press the “Ophelia” nickname on everyone in general, given that Dr. Winn Mayfair calls her that too, so she probably gushed about it to Michael and Rowan MY BOYFRIEND CALLS ME OPHELIA IMMORTAL! Note I'm not judging her on that, despite the fact it sounds like I am; she's a teenage girl being a teenage girl, and I doubt she has any friends her own age around to gush to about these things. God, I just got so sad for her typing this.

Goblin does not show up, but Quinn dreams of him after passing out drunk on AQ's bed from all the champagne. He dreams that Goblin is suffering and unable to reform, to become solid, but he can't without Quinn. The dream then turns to Rebecca, and they dance together. Rebecca tells him she can't take her vengeance on him because he's been too good. I dislike this, but that's just because I dislike Quinn; it utter fairness, he has done everything he could for Rebecca, finding her remains and getting her a proper burial on family ground and trying to make everyone he could aware of what happened to her. So I can see the reasons for her decision.

Quinn wakes up to find Aunt Queen beside him in her white negligee, reading The Old Curiosity Shop,and they have a short but weird conversation about it. She tells Quinn that "Dickens is a madman". Quinn agrees and says that the "darkness" around Little Nell just keeps getting "wilder and wilder". She snuggles up to him, I'm still weirded out by this. Luckily he then decides that since it is almost dark he must go to the Hermitage and check on "my Petrine masterpiece!"

AQ says he can't go into the swamp at this hour---yeah, wasn't avoiding the swamp, especially at night, something agreed upon earlier?---and Quinn's reasoning is...is that both Mona and Goblin are lost to him, though he does not lament the loss of Goblin "but I must go out there and claim what I've done."

...wait, what? What's he done? And what does that have to do with Goblin and Mona? Like at first I thought he was saying that without Mona he has nothing to live for anyway so why not risk it, but then it got to the "claim what I've done" but and I just don't know?

He changes clothes, gets a flashlight, knife, and pistol, and thinks how he has no fear of "him" meaning Petronia which frankly is dumb as fuck, because he knows now how fast and strong Petronia is and that Goblin was the only defense he had against her. He figures they'll have a "decent conversation" and if they'll have a "bargain" since Quinn is the one who did all the renovations "not he."

What. A . Dumb. Fuck.

He passes by Rebecca's grave on the way, and he hears her ponder, "Not your life. Whose life, then?" and he feels a sense of foreboding. I'm gonna spoil this for y'all, Rebecca doesn't even kill anybody and the life Quinn ends up giving to her isn't anybody he loves or cares about it. Because Quinn's life being spared due to his goodness only for that result in the loss of a loved one isn't something Rice would actually put her protagonist through. Unlike the shit Louis went through in Interview, Rice has very much, in my opinion, passed into LKH territory of not wanting her imaginary friends (whom she treats as such in her own words even more than LKH does) to have anything bad happen to them or suffer in any real way.

He thinks about how Mona is so sick and how she wanted to see the Hermitage and how all he can do for her is pray. He plans to go to Mayfair Medical when he gets back from the Hermitage (don't you mean IF you get back, Quinn?) and try to get a peep into her suite.

He gets to the Hermitage, which now has white marble stairs and beds of flowers and many arches like a "small Coptic church."

Petronia is waiting there for Quinn in the doorway, wearing male attire and "his" hair "full and loose", neither beckoning nor forbidding his approach.

"How was I to know that this was the last day of my mortal life? How was I to know that all these random little things which I have described to you would mark the end of my history--that Jerome's father, Tommy's nephew, Aunt Queen's Little Boy, Jasmine's Little Boss, and Mona's Noble Abelard was about to die?"

I feel like this would be more effective if the reader DIDN'T know that Quinn becomes a vampire. Also, his listing his human connections would be effective, in showing what he gives up in becoming a vampire, except...he doesn't. We see at the beginning of the book that he retains these connections, and probably will for at least a few more years til his lack of aging starts to be too apparent. And even then he doesn't lose Mona---spoiler, she becomes a vampire at the end too. So like...this could be effective, except that, again, we meet Quinn when he's already a vampire and telling this to Lestat, and we also meet Aunt Queen for the first time with Quinn as a vampire, so...yeah. We know he actually doesn't lose his life except in the technical sense, nor does he lose any of these people in the book either (okay, I think Aunt Queen dies, but)

But at least maybe we're finally gonna get some action next chapter!
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WELL I JUST GOT THE SCARE OF MY LIFE I went to give the rats their dinner and Dorian HAD BLOOD ALL OVER HIS BELLY turns out he just somehow ripped one of his toenails, he must have got it caught on something. This is a minor injury but it BLEEDS LIKE THE DICKENS with rats for some reason. Anyway, he’s fine, and has even forgiven me for giving him a bath to clean it off.

These rats are gonna be the death of me.

Rocket

Sep. 23rd, 2017 05:36 pm
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This Rocket, as mentioned in my previous post! He is a big sturdy boy (or at least, he was) who thinks he's a wild rat. He loves exploring and trying to escape! He and his brother Blaze were at the pet store for SIX MONTHS and no one wanted them. There wasn't anything wrong with them, they were sweet healthy boys with good behavior, just rats weren't selling. So an employee there who knows me and knows I have a lot of rodents and take care of them well let me adopt them for free this February! Til this recent illness they've both been great :C Rooting for Rocket!











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I've been keeping rats some 15 years or so, and never had this amount of incredible bad luck. Rocket has now gotten sick too, and it doesn't seem to be the same respiratory illness that took Darcy, Topaz, and Dodger. For whatever reason, he's not eating, and as a result has lost weight and is lethargic/weak. I've taken him to the vet, and they don't know what it is but they gave me some meds, and I'm taking him back in regularly for fluids. Meanwhile at home, he's getting a lot of tempting treats like roast beef, yogurt, avocado, and eggs in order to encourage him to eat. I hope he recovers, I really don't want to lose another rat so soon, especially what was just recently a strong young healthy buck like Rocket.

In the meantime, enjoy...

BLACKWOOD FARM CHAPTER 35

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Darcy passed away on Saturday night, due to the same illness that took Dodger and Topaz. I was pretty sure this was coming, hence why I posted his pictures most recently.

Normally I really like to be with them—that was what upset me a lot with Dodger passing while I was on vacation—but Darcy always wanted to be wild and didn’t want to bond with me as much as his cagemates, so I think this is how he would have wanted it, which makes me feel better. Also I spent a lot of time yesterday earlier cuddling with him before he passed and despite usually wanting to be a wild ratty, he did snuggle and brux (rat purring) so I guess he did know I loved him. And I fed him yogurt too!

Next will probably be Amethyst or Phoebe, as they are elderly ladies :C I hope to show off Phoebe before that but I don't have my laptop with her pictures right now.

Anyway, on to the spork!

BLACKWOOD FARM CHAPTER 34

Quinn gets home. AQ and Nash are making plans for Europe. Quinn asks if Tommy can go too, says he can have him here in an hour with his birth certificate and all his clothes. AQ gives it "instant and deep thought" which is a phrase I like, then replies "Is he worthy of such a trip, Tarquin?" WHICH IS A PHRASE I DON'T LIKE

WORTHY OF---?!

WHAT KIND OF CRAP IS THIS like how are we NOT meant to see Quinn and his family as obnoxious snobs?

Quinn gushes about how "worthy" is just the right word, and how AQ will love him and if she doesn't they'll just get a nanny and AQ agrees. Quinn asks for some more "petty cash" in case Terry Sue doesn't want Tommy to go. AQ, shocked, says "You mean she'd sell the boy!" to which Quinn, admittedly generously, says it's just to "sweeten deal" and that "Terry Sue is merely the practical mother of six hungry kids" though he also does call it a "ransom"

Quinn gets the money and on the way he and Goblin have the usual talk about Goblin being afraid to go to Europe. Quinn promises to hold his hand and that he will sit next to him on the plane. He then runs back to the manor to ask Aunt Queen to buy an extra first-class ticket for Goblin. Aunt Queen says she wouldn't dream of putting him in coach and what kind of aunt does Quinn think she is?

...I love Aunt Queen. She's very authenticly an old Southern grande dame to me, in both good and bad ways, even if Rice seems unaware that the bad ways are bad.

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Darcy!

Aug. 30th, 2017 07:22 pm
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This handsome fellow is Darcy. He and all his cagemates--Dorian and the late Dodger---are named after characters from English literature whose names start with D. Why? I wanted a theme, and I had settled on Dorian for the gray and white one (get it?)

Darcy is a nice boy, he doesn't bite or anything, but he is rather high-strung and can get nervous over nothing. He also seems to think he's a wild rat!

Unfortunately, after Dodger died of respiratory illness earlier this year, I started seeing the same signs in Darcy, so his time is limited. But that doesn't stop him from being a sweet boy!







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It has been quite a roller coaster with the rats! Amethyst had a UTI, Rocket had mites, it looked like Pearl might be getting an ear infection...and worst of all, Blaze's foot was horribly swollen and red. We think he got it caught in the cage bars and twisted it around trying to get loose. The vet said that he might lose it, but gave me two oral medications and some wound spray. Looks like it did the trick, because he's made a full recovery! Amethyst's UTI cleared up with some Baytril, some Kitten Revolution took care of Rocket's mites, and Pearl's ear infection has just ended up being chunky ear boogers, nothing serious.

Whew!

The ride never ends with these guys.

Also, Blaze is a sweet calm chill baby, whereas Rocket thinks he's a big tough wild rat. Blaze was perfect when the vet examined his foot, whereas Rocket threw a big squirming pooping peeing tantrum just at having his fur/skin looked at DX

Related to the current spork, a friend noted that what they get from Quinn's bisexuality being instantly accepted by himself and everyone, whereas Petronia's intersexuality and gender-fluidity is treated as freakish, shows that this is a narrative where what the writer approves of his approved of by everyone, whereas what she DOESN'T it treated as aberrant, and I'm inclined to agree.

They also said they have a crush on Petronia and feel bad for it since she's treated in such a fetishized manner and I AM IN THE SAME BOAT, I TOO AM ATTRACTED TO HER and that's even knowing that she's going to rape Quinn DX

BLACKWOOD FARM CHAPTER 33
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This is my fat ratty, Pearl! I got her and her cagemate Topaz to be friends for Amethyst, but Pearl chewed up Amethyst's ears so that didn't work out. She and Topaz lived together just fine though, until Topaz passed away not long ago. Pearl's become really needy since, and always wants cuddles now!








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I was looking through Blood and Gold, another Anne Rice vampire book, for bits about another female vampire I like, who is of course swiftly killed and her girlfriend isn't mad at all and hooks up with one of the protags who does it, and...I knew it was the story of Marius, and told in first-person, like all her novels. What I didn't realize is that, like Blackwood Farm, it's him telling a story to another person. Come to think of it, I think her book Servant of the Bones (not a vampire or witch book, I think it predates them) is as well. She really needs to find a framing device more suited to her style. That said, a friend pointed out that this is a common trope in Gothic fiction, such as Frankenstein. I think I tend to be more critical of things written in the modern era and give older things a pass because they're "classic" in my mind.

I also just want to remind everybody that this story is set in New Orleans, but that only non-white characters are the black staff who work for the wealthy white family of the main character. Who work FOR FREE for this wealthy white family out on their OLD SOUTHERN MANOR just because they enjoy it so much. And do not get to actually live in this manor themselves, but a bungalow on the grounds which is filled with secondhand no-longer-wanted furniture from the manor once the white folks are done with it. And these people are supposedly so "rich" they don't have to work, it's just they LOVE it so much that their entire aspiration in life seems to be serving these white people, to the point they will live on these manor grounds (but again, not in the manor itself with the white family) miles away from anyone else. And they may be "rich" but still use the secondhand furniture and wear secondhand clothing from their white employers.

And this is all presented as being hunky-dory, and that's apparently not something Anne Rice thought was problematic for a second. And this woman, mind you, considers herself an enlightened liberal progressive person.

Oh yeah, and the oldest son/heir of this family is sleeping with one of the staff members sexually, because that sure doesn't conjure up any shitty historical abuses of black slaves and servant women by male masters (though it is iffy on her part too given their age gap, Quinn being a teenager, and the fact she'd have literally helped raise him from infancy) and sleeps literally with an elderly staff member as a sort of stuffed animal or bed warmer (which would be bizarre even without the racial issues, srsly wtf is up with this). This goes on into his teenage years, and is currently still going on at the age of eighteen, and when the elderly woman dies, he tells the next eldest woman on staff to take her place, which she does, because black women are just interchangeable furniture I suppose.

None of this is relevant to the following chapter, I just wanted to note it all again because god it still just blows my mind, and it blows my mind even more I've never seen this discussed or called out EVER.

For the record, I don't think there's any problem writing about bad things, or things you would not want to happen in real life. Heck, I think EVERY story, by nature of the need for conflict, involves something that one wouldn't wish to happen for real, even if it's only an inconvenience. And I also can't support the idea that every protagonist needs to be wholly unproblematic in their views; that's unrealistic and ridiculous for a number of reasons, and I think it actually does more harm than good (promoting the idea that "good" people will just automatically be enlightened and progressive on everything by default) That said, I do think there is a problem when bigoted actions and views are presented utterly uncritically and even positively by the writer, and WHY that is. Like I do not like the idea that the mere presence or acknowledgement of any real-world bigotry or toxicity must be scrubbed from fiction entirely, but I also feel there's got to be a line where you ask "why the fuck are they writing it this way?"

(As a note, this is exempting works like bodice rippers, which are SUPPOSED to be utter fantasies which are largely written BY AND FOR the demographic (women) who would be victimized by those same behaviors in real life. Anyone who knows a thing about the genre knows when they pick it up that this a fantasy made for women who enjoy that, and in no way indicates the writer or reader wants/supports these behaviors in real life. There's just that implicit understanding. I'm talking about works that do not have that implicit understanding, and more like works that, say, would present these dynamics as a realistic healthy real-world romance.)

Anyway, now that I've reminded everybody of the absurd racism going on, we're going to get an entirely DIFFERENT variety of bigoted problematic grossness in...

BLACKWOOD FARM, CHAPTER 32
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Not a spork, but a link:

http://springhole.net/writing/ethics-in-fantastic-fiction.htm

A super good thing to check on for writers of mutants, witches, and other super-powered beings, especially if they’re not meant to be villains. Like the author, I’ve noticed that the ethics around the use of super-powers (the aredeur, anyone?_ tend be written far, far more fast-and-loose than those surrounding any kind of real-world weaponry or tech, even when the effects are the same. I can see why this is, in that it NOT being real means that we don’t think of these things like we would with a gun, but if you’re writing people for whom it *is* real, then they *should* think of these things (and if they don’t, or disregard them, then that should be treated as a flaw/failing on their part)

Amethyst

Aug. 1st, 2017 08:57 pm
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This is my beautiful rat Amethyst! As you can see, she is a blue (gray) dumbo with a white belly. I got her last February from a previous owner, who could no longer give her enough attention since her partner and her were no longer together, and Amethyst's own cagemate had died.

I bought Amethyst two small females to be friends with, Topaz and Pearl, but when Pearl got big she chewed up Amethyst's ears (hence why they look kinda odd) and now Amethyst lives alone. This may be why she's such a huge attention hog! You can't walk by her cage without her running up to the door demanding that you pet her!

She's become my dad's SUPER FAVORITE, he always gives her pats when he sees her, and he puts food aside for her--JUST HER---from his dinner plate!









More ratties to come after every spork!
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I'm gonna do a more straightforward summary of this chapter than usual, without blow-by-blow and direct quotes, I just wanna...skip over all the unnecessary description and dialogue altogether. But suffice to say there is a LOT of words spent on the interior of the Mayfair home. I also tried to put things in a pretty sensible order, because some of the conversations just jumped around everywhere, as well as to remove a lot of things that just didn't matter. Rice is really the queen of irrelevant details.

BLACKWOOD FARM, CHAPTER 31

Rowan and Michael talk with Quinn. He tells them what Julien told him. They then inform him that the reason they don't want a relationship between him and Mona is that, due to giving birth to her mutant child, Mona now miscarries when she becomes pregnant, and each miscarriage weakens her much more so than it would a normal woman. She basically puts her life on the line with each pregnancy. She's in fact sick right now due to this, which is why she was at the hospital and why she hasn't come down to see him herself yet.

This is why they want her to "stop seducing her cousins" and having sex in general. Have they asked WHY she's doing that? I mean, the question of "why is a 15 year old trying to have this much sex, and why is ANYONE obsessed with incest" is pretty valid on its own (then again, I guess "she's a Mayfair and this shit is normalized to her and she's been sexually abused by at least one adult who is NOW HER GUARDIAN" really answers that) but now that Mona *knows* that her life is literally at risk from sex...why is she not stopping? She used protection with Quinn, sure, but as Rowan points out, that's a 100% guarantee. They also say they want her to cooperate with the blood tests and nutritional supplements and other things they're trying to do to help her.

I really, really think Mona has a problem. Teenagers don't have the best sense of consequences, but I feel like if she's been pregnant/miscarried enough times for them to have figured this out, she's been "weakened" enough times by these miscarriages to realize, THIS SHIT IS FOR REAL. But she continues to have sex, and to refuse medical help like the blood tests, supplements, etc. Why?

And why hasn't she had a hysterectomy to just prevent pregnancy altogether? If her life is at risk, and they don't want anymore mutant babies anyway, and she still wants to keep having sex, why wouldn't she sign up for that? Her family OWNS a fucking local hospital and has more money than God, yet it's not even suggested by anyone in this chapter. Maybe we'll get an answer later that she's a hemophiliac or something?

Michael and Rowan explain that this is why they acted like they did, because Mona puts herself in danger and it scares them. I have...very mixed feelings on this. I get where they're coming from. When I was a teenager, I too did things that put me in danger (albeit in a different way than Mona) due to my mental issues. My parents frequently didn't know how to react to my behavior, and I know it scared them greatly. Often, especially with my dad, this would manifest in being angry with me. Now, that's not the RIGHT reaction to a self-harming depressed teenager who runs away from school. But it wasn't abusive either, it was just normal parent/child conflict in an abnormal (well...not THAT abnormal, I guess, the teen goth who cuts herself is virtually a cliche at this point) situation.

Rowan and Michael, on the other hand, were acting like textbook abusers when they came to collect Mona, so much so it's chilling. So even though I get their motive and I believe it to be sincere (at least for Rowan, I don't trust MICHAEL has Mona's best interests at heart) I can't see them as benign as Quinn now does (he thinks they're TERRIFIC of course)

Here's what my theory is: Rice genuinely means them to be concerned for Mona, and to be good people. So she wrote how SHE thinks that good, concerned people would act. Unfortunately, like LKH, Rice's perspective of that is so warped that it came out like...that.

Oh, and Quinn doesn't even THINK of having a vasectomy, let alone bring up that he could have one (which from my POV would be ridiculous because I don't think he's as in love with her as he thinks, but *he* thinks he is) But what he *does* say to Michael and Rowan is that he's not a "pauper" or a "beggar" and isn't going to make Mona live in a "small cottage". Besides the fact that NO ONE ASKED, Quinn talking like this (especially the use of the term "small cottage" which frankly is NOT where poor people live these days) just makes me subscribe that much more to my friend's theory that this book was written originally to take place a century or two ago, and Rice changed that midway but forgot to adjust a lot of dialogue.

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BLACKWOOD FARM CHAPTER 29

No one has ever been more in love than Quinn is with Mona, he'll have you know. No one. So he's glad that the street is empty so that “I did not have to be subjected to ordinary individuals who weren't in love.”

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME? HE LITERALLY EVEN MAKES BEING IN LOVE INTO A SNOBBY EXCLUSIVE ACTIVITY ONLY FOR SPECIAL PEOPLE LIKE HIM? I JUST CAN'T EVEN WITH THIS. IT'S NOT JUST ELITISM, IT'S RIDICULOUS BIZARRE ELITISM LIKE WTF look I get teens thinking “no one understands” their super intense feelings and all, but this is just obnoxious at another level.

When he gets to Mona's door, Goblin appears and Quinn tells him that he has to “complete this mission alone” because he continues to be cringey with this ~manly mission~ shit, and that if Goblin makes trouble he'll never speak to him again. To Quinn's “astonishment” Goblin answers this with “loving kisses” to Quinn's cheek, whispers “Au revoir” and disappears with a lingering “aftertaste” of goodwill.

Quinn hopes Mona will be waiting and ready with her suitcase and passport, but instead a man opens the door. Description:
- Compassionate expression
- Vibrant face
- “Svelte, if not downright swanky” not sure how these are connected but ok
- Prematurely white curly hair
- Quick inquisitive eyes
- “Positively dashing” clothing in an “old-fashioned cut” like “something from a drama about the nineteenth century”

He says “Come in Tarquinn” with a French accent, that he has been waiting for him and wants to talk with him. Quinn asks where Mona is, the man says “Oh, no doubt combing her long red hair so that she can throw it over yonder balcony and lure you like Rapunzel did her forbidden prince.”

Great. Because we need ANOTHER person who talks like this.

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BLACKWOOD FARM CHAPTER 29

“My first manly task was to get to the Hermitage” He and one of the Shed Men, Allen, gather up all the chains there. Quinn and he bury the chains with Rebecca's remains. I guess Allen finds this funny, since when Quinn tells him that's what they're gonna do “he went into a state of sustained hilarity.” Not cool, Allen. And this from a guy Quinn says plays Santa Claus at the Christmas parties!

Quinn says he doesn't feel any “shimmer of Rebecca” so he says a long prayer for her to “go into the Light” and “so my first manly task had been completed.”

Way to ruin the moment with that, Quinn.

“On the second: of course Allen knew where Terry Sue lived”

Aw damn we gotta start with the slut-shaming already?

There are two rusted cars in the yard (curiously, one is a limousine) and a pair of toddlers “roaming” with “filthy faces and diapers”. Quinn knocks, then goes inside without being let in. Rude, Quinn. Rude, and a good way to get shot. This is the boonies, after all, from what I can tell.

“Tucked in the very end of the trailer there was a voluptuous woman in the bed, a woman with the face of a big china doll, nursing a baby, and a little girl, perhaps ten years old and barefoot” who is stirring a pot of grits and has bruises on her arm. The place feels crowded and damp to Quinn, overwhelmingly so, and smells of urine, vomit, and mildew, as well as rotten fruit and shit.

Without introducing himself or saying what the hell he's doing in her home, Quinn congratulates her on the new baby. The woman likewise doesn't even seem confused by a stranger barging in, and asks if he's brought any money. Though she has the face of a “Renaissance Madonna” her voice is “full of meanness, perhaps it was just practicality.” And she's got reason to be practical (as well as irate) since she then says she's broke, her boyfriend Charlie has walked out, her stitches are torn, and she's got a fever. Quinn gives her a thousand dollars from his pocket that he tells us he took from the “kitchen petty cash box.”

….petty cash. In the kitchen. They have a goddamn cash jar in the kitchen with apparently at least a thousand dollars in it. Holy smokes. That's so rich it's kind of disgusting. Also maybe a little weird? I may be wrong, but at some point I got it in my head that the mega-rich seldom actually touch cash? But everyone is different and, well, the Blackwoods are more than a little weird.

Terry Sue is "appropriately flabbergasted" by this, so I guess Quinn does know how insane it is for someone to just get handed a thousand dollars at random, even if it's apparently just "petty cash" to him.

Quinn's “heart went out” to the baby, which he finds “miraculous” in terms of how tiny and nearly-newborn it is. Terry Sue (I assume this must be her) tells the little girl, Brittany, to hurry up with the grits and put on the bacon and “go get those kids”, and that she'll need to go to town for groceries later. Poor kid. She offers grits to Quinn, which I think is quite kind of her, given the circumstances. Quinn says he'll take Brittany into town for the groceries (Quinn, a strange man offering to a little girl's mom to take that little girl in his car alone isn't a great idea) and asks where Tommy is.

Terry Sue, still with no idea who the fuck Quinn is, tells him that Tommy is out in the woods reading a book, which she says he stole and is sure that the woman at the store is “as crazy as he is” and “going to come get him”. Quinn asks if he has any other books, Terry Sue replies “Who's got money for books?” and tells him to look around the place, pointing out things like the broken window, a washing machine that doesn't work and another little girl who she says doesn't talk. She adds that she thanks God every day that he sent her Brittany, and he sent her first. Poor Brittany. She adds that “Pops never gave me money for books.” Again, Quinn hasn't introduced himself, so I wonder how she knows to mention Pops...maybe he was Pops to everyone? He seems to have been a community figure, given his funeral attendance.

Quinn goes out and finds a little boy reading on a log. It's a book of art, with picture by paintings of people like Van Gogh and Seurat. The kid has bruises and a burn, so the first damn thing out of Quinn's mouth is to ask if Charlie (the mom's boyfriend) hit him and pushed his hand up against the heater. Tommy does not answer.

Yeah, Quinn, be a total stranger, walk right up to an abused child, and openly ask them about the abuse. Goddamn what a dumbass. But I also can't say that this idiocy, same as saying Brittany can come to town with him, seems out of character or unlikely for such a tremendously sheltered and privileged and pampered guy. Why should he know to do otherwise? I just wish other people reacted to him with equal realism. Which I guess Tommy is here by not responding.

Quinn tells him with equal bluntness that he is Pops' grandson, and that Tommy is Pops' son, and everything is going to change. Tommy still doesn't say anything. Quinn tells him one day he' ll get to go to Amsterdam and see Van Gogh's work in person. Tommy says “I would settle for New York so I could see all the Impressionists and the Expressionists at the Met.”

Quinn is stunned and replies “You're some kind of genius.” Tommy says that no he's not, he just reads a lot. I'm with Tommy; being a kid who likes art isn't the same as being a genius. That's not what being a genius means. This reminds me of when I was twelve, and I would try to establish my child characters as being geniuses by having them like adult writers like Michael Crichton and Stephen King, the same adult writers that I was reading at the time. It also seems to me to be more of Anne Rice's idea of liking “fancy” things making you a better, more important person than the rest of the crowd.

Tommy does seem to be a gifted reader though. He says he's read everything he wanted at the library and now he's working through the Books-a-Million store, that art books are his favorite and Pops bought him a few books on art. I do have to note, as a reviewer on Goodreads pointed out, that isn't it coincidental how the only kid like this in Terry Sue's family is the one related to Quinn and all the others are just silent dirty background noise? I like Tommy though, I get reading to get away, and I like that he doesn't jump on the “genius” compliment.

I certainly like him a lot more than Quinn, and he's sure as heck probably smarter than Quinn, who thinks the following:

“That was an astounding revelation. Pops and books on art. Where would Pops get books on art? What did Pops know of books on art? Yet he had done it for this bastard son whom he allowed to live in the squalor of this place.”

Quinn, getting books on art is not a goddamn feat. You got a book store, you ask for books on art, problem solved. It's not difficult. What is with this wonder? One of my friends thinks this book was originally written to take place a few centuries ago, and then at some point Rice decided to rewrite it in modern times and added stuff like the computer, but failed to take out shit like Mona saying “quadroon” so casually. That would make this passage make a bit more sense. Only a bit though, since I don't think obtaining art books would be difficult then either for someone with Pops' wealth.

Seriously, what a fucking dumbass.

Quinn gives him fifty dollars for books and says not to steal anymore. Tommy says he didn't steal it “That's my mother talking. You listen to my mother, and you'd think Charlie pushed my hand up against the heater.”

So I guess that means Tommy is either trying to deny, as many victims do, that Charlie is hurting him, or he means it's someone else, probably Terry Sue herself, who did it.

They talk a bit more about art, like Quinn asking him what painting he would save if he could only save one, then Quinn asks him if he'd like to get out of here and go to a good boarding school. Tommy considers but says he can't leave Brittany, it wouldn't be fair. He sighs and says that his mother really doesn't want them, that it was okay when it was just him and Brittany but now with the others, she hits them a lot, and sometimes he has to get between her and the others.

Quinn is understandably “revolted” but “I had no solution”. He reflects how he's always heard that there are problems with both the welfare system and foster care system and so he doesn't know what to do. I'm kind of curious who he heard this from; it doesn't seem like anyone in his household would have experience with it, and he doesn't get out like...at all. Maybe from television and books? This isn't saying it's wrong for him to know this, just in my own experience, most people who aren't on welfare are usually saying the only problem with it is that it exists.

Quinn agrees with Tommy that he can't leave them behind, and Tommy says he's going to a better school than Brittany as it is, but that Brittany is still smart and does her homework and is getting a good education anyway. Well, good for her.

Quinn says he'll be back with more money, and maybe he can make things better so she won't hit them. Tommy asks how, Quinn says to let him think on it. Tommy then randomly asks him about the lost city of Atlantis. Tommy says he believes in it and want to find the ruins one day.

...okay, given Rice's most recent book being about Atlantis and aliens and the spirit Amel, which created vampires via Akasha, being from Atlantis, was this like...deliberate foreshadowing? Did she already have this idea in mind? Or at this point did she just think Atlantis was neat but didn't yet have any plans to work it into her mythos, she just had Tommy mention it because hey it's cool and a kid would like it, right?

Quinn says he has to go to work now, Tommy says he thought Quinn was so rich he didn't have to work, which is completely correct. Quinn says he means work on his problems, because I'm so sure a kid wants to hear about that. Especially a kid in Tommy's position.

He asks if he can give Tommy a hug, which Tommy allows, and Quinn concludes “he was a solid, loving little creature. I really adored him.”

Quinn calls Aunt Queen on the car phone to ask about purchasing a house for Terry Sue, fully insured and fully furnished, as he hopes that she might not hit the kids if conditions are improved. He calls Grady, the family lawyer, about the same thing, how they're gonna take care of the taxes, cable, utilities, everything else, get her a nanny and a cleaning woman, give her an allowance, so she'll have no cause to hit her kids.

I think this is just, like, a fix-everything fantasy? Like Terry Sue's situation is a genuinely shitty and sad and complicated one for which there's no easy answer. Except, there is, apparently. Just throw an insane amount of money at it.

I can't get mad at Quinn for this of course, it's great he's using his money to do this, it's just...why even set it up if it's all going to be resolved with a neat little bow within the chapter? Assuming Quinn is right and this does make her stop hitting them, which it admittedly might not. But if it does...what's the point of this? Just to make Quinn look good, I guess.

Oh yeah and it gets dropped in that Charlie isn't the new baby's father because I guess we had to know that. Quinn suspect it belongs to Pops too. He also "judged Pops, though I tried not to do it, for leaving his son, Tommy, in this mess, and how loveless he had been to this woman, Terry Sue. But then, maybe there was more to it than I in my youth could understand."

He has hopes that Tommy will come one day to live at Blackwood Manor, and travel the world with him and Mona and Aunt Queen and Nash and maybe he'll even find Atlantis. He then tells Allen to go back with the pickup take Brittany to the store and buy her groceries. I kinda wonder why he specifies to use the pickup to transport Brittany when they went there in the Mercedes.

He goes home, puts on an Armani shirt and Versace tie, goes to a florist to get a bouquet, and is off to see Mona.
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Okay, after this post I'm gonna make an account on Dreamwidth, I'll post a link there when I do.

This is meant to bring the Vampire Chronicles together with the Mayfair Witches. And it does do that...but very ham-handedly.

Quinn randomly meets Mona in the hospital cafe, is randomly besotted with her at first sight, and has sex with her the next day, and within said day is trying to get her away from her family and out of the country, and wants to marry her. Which could be done well. No, really, it could. The Gothic is a genre based on emotion and romance, so a whirlwind-but-sincere connection as lovers could be done well here if the work was put into building the proper chemistry and it integrated with the larger story.

But it does neither. There is zero chemistry building, it's really just Quinn being obsessed at random with Mona, and Mona only showing any signs of 'reciprocation' when it means escaping her family, and it bogs down the plot at length with really very little relevance to the larger story, which just goes on hold for chapters and chapters of this nonsense. It's basically the clumsiest most forced-coincidental shove-together of a witch and a will-be-vampire so that the books can merge storylines.

And it's like...a more organic way for them to meet would hardly be difficult to accomplish? Look, Quinn already knows Father Kevin. He's already told him about Goblin, and Father Kevin believes him. Father Kevin admits to believing a lot about the supernatural, and it's no surprise, given his family and that he knows the Talamasca. And Father Kevin, due to this personal connection, came to visit Quinn in the hospital after the stranger attacked him.

Why not say that despite Father Kevin's reservations regarding the Talamasca, he believed that they were the best people to help Quinn? That would be very easy and natural, much more so than his love-at-first-sight meeting with the girl who just happens to see ghosts and be the most important Mayfair witch ever. Father Kevin could bring Quinn to the Talamasca, and they would probably be most intrigued by his tale of Rebecca and the mysterious stranger he believes responsible for her death and others, and they would begin to look into with him, moving the plot along. If meeting Mona and having a romance with her is a must, that's easily done too---since she's with the Talamasca as well, he can meet her through them, and she can help solve the mystery with him, since she's clearly interested as well. They can forge a much more organic connection over time without derailing the plot, and introduce the Mayfairs and their skeevy mysteries in a much more natural, well-paced way so that it runs concurrently with the main plot, rather than pushing it to the side for chapters on end of awkward "romance" and I-just-met-you-but infodumping.

It might take a bit more effort, and I know Rice loves her insta-connections, but I really think this would work so much better for a number of reasons, and I'd probably enjoy it a lot more.
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I did a little bit of research for context, and...remember how Rowan Mayfair is the heroine of the first Mayfair witches book, The Witching Hour? And she and her boyfriend, Michael Curry, also from the first book, are now Mona's legal guardians?

Michael is the father of Mona's baby. Which she had when she was thirteen. Michael was 48 as of his introduction in The Witching Hour. I think she's supposed to have """seduced"""" him, and I'd like to point back to the post I made about how Rice has a tendency to make the bullshit pedophile defense of the seductive child into a reality so that people in her books can have sex with children and not be terrible for it. Now, obviously children, for varying reasons, can be sexual. I'll even admit that maybe they can try to, as far as they understand it, seduce an adult. Generally this is a sign they have already been sexually abused by one, or at least have been exposed to inappropriate material or activities, but I'm willing to believe that a kid with a crush and no other problems can try to get the attention of an adult (though if they're doing it in overtly SEXUAL ways, there is, again, clearly a problem already)

And you know what?

THAT DOESN'T MAKE IT OKAY TO HAVE SEX WITH THEM

BECAUSE THEY ARE A CHILD

Like I just do not even get this logic of "it was okay because it was the kid's idea" like SO WHAT? THEY'RE A KID! KIDS THINK IT'S A GOOD IDEA TO LET THEM DRIVE THE CAR!

And honestly, the very fact that Michael *can* be seduced by a thirteen year old means he was attracted to one in the first place. People talk about children dressing "provocatively" and I'm like, provoking to who? Do you think ordinary grown men suddenly get boners for six year olds because they wear a bikini to the pool one day instead of a one piece? No! Because if they're not attracted to kids to begin with, the kid's clothes aren't gonna change that! And it baffles me how if you asked someone, hey, would you be attracted to, say, a fat woman if she wore a miniskirt and they'll be all EW NO but somehow they think that a short dress on a child can just suddenly warp someone who isn't into children into being an insta-pedophile. It's asinine.

And I understand that some teens develop fast. I can understand it if someone's hindbrain thinks they're looking at a grown person because "boobs" or "muscles" and I can even understand the adult finding themselves attracted to what physically looks to them like another adult. But we aren't animals, and as adults, as human beings, we should know better than to act on those attractions. They are not okay. It is your responsibility to understand and remember that no matter what their bodies are doing, this is a CHILD.

Basically, Michael Curry is disgusting. And I hope that Mona was not his legal ward when this happened (not that it's not unforgivable as is but the additional power dynamics there would just make it worse, if it can even be worse). He definitely shouldn't have been made her guardian after, but the Mayfairs are obviously pretty twisted so I'm not surprised by this. And guys, I like twisted. The idea of a secretive creepy incestuous Southern family of witches is RIGHT UP MY ALLEY. I love that idea so very much. But the thing about my love for twisted trash is it NEEDS TO BE PRESENTED AS TWISTED TRASH like is that so much to ask? Apparently so, from a lot of fantasy authors.

Also, two other things about Michael:

- According to TV Tropes, he had sex with Mona when Rowan was in "dire straits". They don't specify that this means (it was in one of the books after The Witching Hour so I didn't read it), but basically Michael would still be scum even if Mona had been an adult.

- Rowan was raised by adopted parents, totally apart from the Mayfairs, with no knowledge of her biological family. Michael is an ordinary guy who gets drawn into the Mayfair shit in The Witching Hour due to her discovering her heritage and powers. I don't remember this from The Witching Hour so I guess it was in a later book (though I don't remember much from The Witching Hour) but it turns out Michael is a Mayfair too, descended from an illegitimate affair between one of the Mayfair men and a house maid. So Rowan is raised TOTALLY APART from the Mayfair family and neither she nor Michael know their heritage, but they just happen to hook up? I know this is a supernatural story and all but that's just too big a coincidence to buy, and...both Rowan and Mona are stated to be really inbred already (Rowan's father is her mother's grandfather) is MORE INCEST needed? Like, whoops, you think you're fucking outside the family tree but YOU'RE NOT? And spoiler alert, turns out Quinn is descended from Julien too.

I'm starting to think this whole incest thing is a fetish on Rice's part or something; it would explain some of the weird stuff with Quinn and Aunt Queen earlier, as well as stuff with Lestat and his mother, and maybe even some of the Lestat/Louis/Claudia dynamics (which I had *thought* was *meant* to be disturbing). It would also explain the very weird detail of Rowan being able to survive birthing a Taltos because said Taltos (which grow rapidly to maturity after birth) breast-fed her afterwards. Like, Taltos as like, super duper witches or something, right? And Rowan herself is a really good doctor specifically because she can use her own witch powers to heal cells. So...shouldn't her Taltos daughter be able to do that? But nope, apparently the way she heals her mom is to breastfeed her. I just...question why that's what Rice decided to go with. That's all I'm saying.

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In this chapter, Anne Rice attempts to make a scientific explanation for ghosts. I will be honest, I hate when she tries to do this for her supernatural creatures. I don't think she's ever done it for her vampires, though I could be wrong, but she's done it for the witches and werewolves I believe, now for ghosts and spirits.

Now, let me tell you the reason I dislike it. It's not that I think that writers should never try to make scientificly-plausible explanations for supernatural creatures. There's a lot of instances where I really LIKE that, actually. But it has to...fit? This is gonna be more just opinion than everything else, but I feel like Rice's supernaturals are the type that work better when left purely in the realm of mysticism, outside science, outside explanations. The overall style and tone of her work just lends itself much better to that, to things that just ARE without anyone really know why they are or how they work. I am someone who usually likes explanations. But I feel like, in the case of Rice's mythology, supernatural explanations are better than “scientific” ones. For example, the first vampire being created by a spirit entering her flesh, that works for her stuff. The stuff said about ghosts here...I don't think it really does. But this is very much my opinion, your mileage may vary.

Also I don't think the science posited adds up but I don't understand enough about science myself to actually dispute it.

I just realized Hamlet is a theme in the book, like Father Kevin talks about Banquo and the ghost, I think it was quoted in Lestat's conversation with Aunt Queen, and a few other times. And I was randomly flipping through the book and came to a place ahead where Quinn quotes it at someone in anger. And, of course, Mona's shit about Ophelia. I wouldn't say that novels can't reference classical works or have them as a recurrent theme---Nabokov did that expertly with Carmen—but there doesn't really seem to be a point with how Rice does it, it's just there? It just seems kind of hackneyed and pretencious, like she thinks sticking Shakespeare in will make it classy elevated literature or somehow “smarter” and...I don't think she's pulling it off. There's still half a book to go, of course.

By the way here's a fun reminder she's a bratty vindictive person above and beyond anything LKH ever did:
http://lindsayetumbls.tumblr.com/post/160932356738/do-not-trust-anne-rice

I'll be honest, it kinda makes me scared to keep posting?

BLACKWOOD FARM CHAPTER
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This chapter begins on page 351. This story ends on page 626. Meaning, I'm a little more than halfway through the book, and while I would not say nothing has happened, I think it's dragging it's feet. I feel like more should have happened by now. One of the reviews on the back says that Quinn's story is "like a curiosity shop, filled with lovely things" and I think that's accurate---there's a lot of beauty in her prose and descriptions, and certainly some interesting ideas, but it's not a STORY. Well, that's not right. There is a story, but it takes a backseat to the "curiosity shop" aspect. Admittedly, I do think a focus on aesthetic over story can be done well but, as I've only said about a dozen times, that doesn't so much work when it's "guy telling a story to another guy" and also Rice clearly WANTS there to be a story---the ghosts, Goblin, the mysterious stranger on the island, and so on. I can tell she is TRYING to move the plot along but she gets incredibly bogged down in boring stuff. That's the real problem, not the beautiful stuff but the BORING stuff. I think I could tolerate the pace a lot better if the diversions were at least more engaging. Especially because she's so TALENTED at beautiful decadent Gothic descriptions. I truly think if she changed the framing device and focused on her strengths over her weaknesses, there might be less substance to the story but it would be a more enjoyable read. It wouldn't be some great novel, but Gothic novels were never meant to be "great" they were meant to be sensationalist and romantic and bizarre and focused far more on emotion and scenery than on making sense and SHE'S SUPER GOOD AT THAT. I realize that sort of sounds like an insult with that last part, but still.

And there is a good deal of that in Blackwood Farm. It's not like the whole thing is bad. A lot of it is not. I just feel like it's not as good as it COULD be. Basically, one more reason she should go back to using an editor.

But yeah, I feel like the story is really NOT progressing at a decent pace, it's the middle of the book and the stage is still being set.

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BLACKWOOD FARM CHAPTER 24

They got to the cottages and have very good sex "like little jungle animals." Afterwards while they cuddle, she says that she "wanted to put my mouth on it" and "Come, let me wash you in the bathroom and I'll do it"

I guess Quinn thinks that's degrading or something, because he tells us "I protested gallantly. I required no such sacrificial adoration!"

Mona tells Quinn that she WANTS to do it "and I was led like a slave into the tiled bath where she performed the arousing ablutions" and then they go back to bed and she blows him and "then I died when I came."

Oh good, is the book over? Or is this when he becomes a vampire?

Neither, it was figurative. Pity. Aside from the cringey phrases here (sacrificial adoration, arousing ablutions) it's not bad. I wasn't aroused by it, but there was nothing obnoxious or ridiculous either, nor was it stupidly drawn out. It's definitely better than any LKH sex scene I recall, but that's not a high bar.

...could do without the slave bit there. I know she means like a Roman slave, but still. It's sort of mega-cringe coming from the guy with the happy slave staff.

She asks if no one has ever done that before, and he says no one has, and I wonder if he's telling the truth. Jasmine, Rebecca, and Goblin never did it? Come to think of it, as many issues as I have with Quinn and Jasmine on Quinn's end, I feel like I should also note I'm a little weirded out on Jasmine's end too because he's a barely-legal boy she's known since he was a baby. But I'll save that for another time.

He asks if they can sleep cuddled up together, and there's some description of that, of the moist heat from her boobs and groin and the cool air conditioner and stuff. Mona tells him he's a beautiful boy "and your ghost is here and he's watching us." Quinn tells Goblin to go away or he won't speak to him for a long time. Quinn asks Mona if she can see him, she says he's gone.

Then she starts talking about how "I am Ophelia once again. I am floating in the water, with only 'nettles, daisies, and long purples' to hold me up, and I will never sink to 'muddy death'. You can't imagine how it is with me."

Apparently consistently comparing herself to Ophelia, namely Ophelia's corpse/death scene, is a thing with Mona, and as someone who is a mentally ill oft-suicidal woman I really find this super gross, since she seems to be completely romanticizing this already grossly culturally romanticized thing. Like nothing turns me off faster then "The Ophelia" trope in media as is, so an apparently neurotypical woman (I can't find anything online about Mona being suicidal or insane in any way, unless you count super sexual and incestuous as mental illness) gushing about identifying herself with a woman famous for being ~oh so pretty~ WHILE KILLING HERSELF is super gross to me. Like, can we not? The Victorians were shitty for it, and it's shitty now. Stop. Maybe I'm overreacting and this will get better but it's making my hackles raise now for aforementioned personal reasons.

Also, what the fuck does it have to do with anything? Quinn asks this, though in a way that seems to encourage the fantasy:

"How so? I see you borne along forever, vital, precious, oh so sweet---" and then he starts getting tired, and Mona tells him to go on and sleep, that men sleep when it's over while women want to talk sometimes, then starts yammering more stuff about being Ophelia. She then says "they won't find me till tonight, and maybe not even then. I tip these hotels pretty high, I think I may have won them over."

Rather than asking what I want to know--who "they" are that won't find her--Quinn asks if she means she's done this before.

Mona: "Tarquinn, I have a huge family. And one time it was my goal to be intimate with every one of my cousins. I succeeded with more than I can count without the aid of a computer. Of course it wasn't always in a hotel. It was more often in the cemetery at night---"

Quinn: "The cemetery! You're serious?"

THAT'S WHAT YOU'RE CONCERNED ABOUT?! Like okay, fucking in a cemetery is kinda weird, but SHE JUST SAID SHE FUCKED HER FAMILY MEMBERS!

Mona says her life isn't normal, that "Mayfairs don't seek for a normal life" but her life is abnormal even for a Mayfair. She adds that her goal of cousin-fucking has been over for some time but she did fuck her cousin Pierce here, but "it doesn't matter, Tarquinn, it's all new with you, that's what matters. And I was never Ophelia with Pierce. I'm going to marry Pierce but I'll never be Ophelia."

Oh, so Pierce doesn't make you feel like a woman who kills herself tragically? Wow, clearly it's a loveless relationship.

Quinn responds that "you have to marry me"

Yeah, he says "have to"

No comment needed

He says his life isn't normal either and they're clearly meant for each other, that she has no idea. She says yes she does, that Father Kevin told her how his ghost goes everywhere he does and he grew up with adults and has never known other children. She adds that though Kevin is a gossip, he's a good priest, because she almost got him into bed but "he proved to be immovable" Well good for him, not sleeping with his cousin who is also only fifteen by the way, I flipped ahead and she mentions this in a few chapters or so. So who knows how young she was when she came on to him.

Quinn asks "Did he warn you off me? Did he tell you I was crazy?" and Mona says it's the other way around, that "they're out to protect you from me. 'Course, they do keep me under lock and key."

Well, I'm not normally one for controlling women's sexualities, but if I had an underage female relative who was so unusually sexually active so as to be obsessed with seducing her relatives, I would assume she was suffering some sort of psychological thing, probably stemming from sexual abuse, and try to keep her under close eye too because she might not be in the right mind to be making these decisions, and because a teenage girl running off to have sex with someone she literally met yesterday could get seriously hurt by some pervert. I'm trying to decide if that sounds victim blaming, like I'm saying girls get hurt by perverts because they're promiscuous, but that's NOT what I mean, what I mean is like...there are bad people out there who will try to pick up young girls, and if I were Mona's family, I would be doubtful if she was capable of realizing when she's in danger from these dudes. Hell, plenty of girls might not realize that even if they DON'T have any kind of psychological issues going on. That's WHY a lot of these monsters prey on teens.

Mona says she is "considered to be a raving slut" so it could be the scenario that I just posited, or it could also be that her family does consider her to be just that. That's not something I agree with, but it's how a lot of people would see her.

She adds that this is why she was at the door so fast, that "I had to see you before they did. And I'm not the only witch in the family."

Quinn asks what she means by witch, she asks hasn't he heard of "us" to which he seems to take to mean the Mayfair family in general, to which he responds he's only heard good things, like about Father Kevin or about Dr. Rowan of Mayfair Medical. Mona says that Father Kevin came to the South because "we needed him. Oh, there's so much I wish I could tell you, but I can't." She says when she saw Quinn talking with Quinn, she felt God had answered her prayers by sending her "someone with secrets! Only now I realize it doesn't change things with me. It can't. Because I can't tell you everything."

She starts to cry, Quinn begs her not to and tells her she can confide in him, she says she believes him and "I'm not sure Ophelia actually cries in the play, does she?"

Hey Mona, if you're going to proclaim yourself a famous character from a play, maybe you should actually see the play she's from?

"Maybe crying is what keeps people from going mad," she continues, "It's just that there are things that can't be told, and there are things nobody can do anything about."

I really would like to know what Mona would think is something that can't be told, given she's happy to admit to being obsessively incestuous. The Mayfairs already seem quite a bit more interesting than the Blackwoods, if only by being more apparently twisted. I mean, I guess that's not fair, Patsy and Aunt Queen are interesting, and Manfred murdering Rebecca is obviously interesting, as is just what's going on out there in his Hermitage, but a huge family of incestuous witches with secrets they can't even tell to people who know they're incestuous witches is a pretty big hook for a reader. Especially after sitting through so much of Quinn's boring narration.

Quinn says that "it's always been my way to tell" and how he embraced Goblin and never kept him a secret, and adds there's a ghost that haunts him and a mysterious stranger who beat him up and "I know I'm going to marry you, Mona. I know it. I know it's my destiny."

I keep going "wtf this is ridiculous" every time Quinn says something like that, but then I remember Quinn's very...peculiar upbringing and I'm like, you know, that makes sense.

Mona replies that won't happen, they can have a little while and talk to each other and "be with each other like this, but we can't really be together"

Quinn asks why, thinking that if he loses her he will always regret it, and believes Goblin knows it too, and that's why Goblin went away with no argument, and thinks about the damage Goblin could do if he wanted.

Quinn urges her to come live at Blackwood manor, saying she can stay with him in his room or in Pops' room, which he assures her Pops didn't die in, and says Jasmine can gets her some clothes and toiletries and things at Wal-Mart to tide her over.

...Wal-Mart? That's...not a name I would expect one of Rice's richie-rich types to drop.

Mona says "God, you're as mad as one of us. I thought we Mayfairs were the only ones who did things like that."

Quinn says no one in the house will bother her, just his 79 year old Aunt Queen might have "sage advice" (I feel like she might have more than that for Mona, given her earlier reaction) and that his private tutor Nash is a "perfect gentleman".

Mona says "So you don't have to go to school either. Cool!"

WHOA A TEENAGER THAT SOUNDS LIKE SHE COULD BE A TEENAGER FOR A SINGLE SENTENCE?!

So Quinn phones Jasmine and tells her Mona wears a petite everything "and away we went" and he realizes when he gets behind the wheel that he's been awake thirty six hours.


....yeah, that's a great time to drive a car. Mona must agree because she says to let her drive and Quinn agrees and he thinks about how she drives in a really SEXY way and "that somebody so delectable could drive" because I guess normally hot people can't drive or something, and he says to Goblin, "I love her, old boy, you understand, don't you?"

Goblin is looking at him with a "cold, contemptuous" expression from the backseat and tells him, "Yes, and I very much enjoyed her too, Tarquinn."

Has Goblin ever called Quinn by his full name before? Not that I can recall.

Quinn is angry, he wanted to choke him" and says "You're lying you bastard!" and "You think you can sneak inside me!" but Mona confirms, "as she pushed the car past eighty five miles per hour" that "Oh he was there. I could feel him."

I like the idea of every chapter ending with Mona saying something shocking and blunt while in a car.

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