BULLET, CHAPTER 43
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QUESTION: Would anyone like to read it if I made posts about my Anitaverse characters? Not fic, just...posts about them. Like this is who they are, this is their background, that kind of thing. Some of them are ones you've seen in fic (such as Lucille, Armel, and Cornelius), some aren't, some are more minor and don't have much to them, some are really fleshed-out, some are expies from my original stories, others were made for the Anitaverse but I'm going to convert for said stories, etc. But they're all in the Anitaverse in some form or another, so I consider them relevant enough to justify posting...but only if you guys would actually enjoy that. This is a sporking blog, after all, not a Let Me Yap About My Stuff blog, so I promise I'll not be offended if you just want to see sporkings only instead.
In other news...
New rat! My sister is moving, so she gave me Sid, Ratsputin's former cagemate. He has a lump/scab on his nose that seems to be an infection so we'll be giving him antibiotics for that. He also already gets along with Miss Blatz <3
GOOD NEWS: Sid and Ratsputin got along in the bathtub! At first Sid was really weird, like aggressively friendly...he kept herding Ratsputin with his body and basically forcing him to cuddle...but by the end they were just hanging side by side and Ratsputin was bruxing! I was able to carry them together back down to their cages. BAD NEWS: Ratsputin's penis was just covered today in gelatinous blood (like menstrual lining almost) and I'm going to try and find out if the antibiotic I used for him (which is almost out) is on the market.
BULLET, CHAPTER 43
Anita says she normally has trouble getting naked in front of a stranger but Meph is just so comfortable with all of this (well...wereanimals are comfortable with nudity, remember?) that she can't be uncomfortable around him. "If he honestly had as few hangups as it seemed, he'd be damn near refreshing." As opposed to the rest of your harem, none of whom seem to have any hangups about nudity or sex? Oh, wait, I think means personality hangups in general...don't worry, Anita, none of the new harem members you've collected since NiC have really had any personality, let alone enough for flaws.
Meph takes his clothes off and goes down on Asher and Anita talks about how some people just go down on others like a duty or chore but Meph clearly enjoys it because clearly he must have a texture fetish as Anita has emphasized again how much he's after that. "He sucked, rolled, lipped, kissed, and just enjoyed everything he could do with Asher." He stops to tell Asher that "You taste close." Is that something you can actually taste? Precum, I guess, that's a thing, right? Meph then asks why the others are just watching. YES, MEPH, STOP NOW TO CHAT, I'M SURE THAT'S *EXACTLY* WHAT ASHER WANTS JUST AS HE'S ABOUT TO COME. Nathaniel says he likes to watch, Anita says she wanted to watch Asher's reactions, and Micah said that he knew Anita and Nathaniel wanted to watch. Meph, who at least keeps his hands on Asher's cock, says "Trade me" and both Micah and Anita ask "What?" like the idiots they are. Nathaniel, however, agrees to and goes over to Asher and Meph."I was beginning to get the idea that maybe Nathaniel was more comfortable with a lot of things than we were" NO SHIT, SHERLOCK, THE BONDAGE-OBSESSED NO-LIMITS FORMER-PROSTITUTE HAS FEWER LIMITS THAN SOMEONE WHO NEVER DOES ANYTHING EXCEPT ORAL AND HETERO-MISSIONARY? Like, is this even news? Wasn't there a whole sub-plot once about Nathaniel wanting Anita to go all dominatrix on him in ways she wasn't comfy with?
"Micah put me very firmly in front of his body" and instead of assuming he's going to bang her from behind while still watching the show like I figured, she goes on this paragraph-long inner monologue about...I'm not totally sure, actually, except I think she's saying he's okay with Nathaniel going to Asher just not so much with a strange man? Or that it's okay for Nathaniel to bang Anita with him but not a strange guy? Yeah I think that's it, since Meph is going to be joining them, but I don't really know, it's frankly indecipherable to me the way it's worded. I am also amused that the way he holds her "used my body as a happy shield." HAPPY SHIELD HAHAH WHAT? Meph is crawling over to Micah and Anita with a hard-on while "Nathaniel's mouth slid over Asher" OH MY GOD HE'S UNHINGED HIS JAW AND IS EATING ASHER WHOLE AAAH! "the sight of it tighten things low and hard in my body" I'm not surprised that Anita apparently has a penis, I guess, but I am a little shocked that she's turned out to be a vore fetishist, who knew!
She thinks about how she liked Meph blowing Asher but she likes Nathaniel blowing him even more and concludes that "It wasn't just watching men doing each other; it was watching the men I loved do each other." Even Anita's yaoi fetish is better and more pure and less slutty and more justified than yours, because it's about LOVE too, really!
Meph strokes her hips and tells her she's beautiful. Anita tells the reader for the umpteenth time that she's never been this intimate with a stranger without the ardeur (but of course it's still Not Slutty of her in this case too because she HAS too, guys, rememer?!) and Micah starts playing with her tits and Meph kisses her and she grinds against him. Then Meph "licked between my legs and it drew a small sound that Micah ate with his kisses." Not only did I imagine Micah literally eating a sound somehow, but Anita continuously says "between my legs" in this chapter to mean vagina and it keeps making me think of just literally the empty spot between two legs. It's a common metaphor/euphemism though, I believe, so that's probably as much me being literal-minded (as I often am) than anything else. So yeah, when Meph then "plunged his tongue between my legs" I just think of him licking the patch of mattress between her legs while she stares in bafflement.
Meph licks her "sweet spot" and she can feel herself getting close to coming while Micah keeps up the kissing and breastplay. she comes and "screamed my orgasm into Micah's mouth" which sounds so fucking awkward and weird. She feels Meph stop for a moment, then he sucks on her cunt some more and Micah asks if she's had enough. She taps her hand on the bed "which was one of our signals when we were rendered speecheless with orgasm" Can that really happen? Micah tells Meph she's done, Meph gets in "one last long lick" and Anita writhes against Micah and she can feel that he has a hard-on "and I wanted that between my legs. I so wanted that." IF I HAD GOTTEN A 'MOOD' FROM THIS AT ALL, THAT VERBAL TIC WOULD HAVE JUST KILLED IT. But then it's Meph who starts putting his dick against "my opening" instead. "I struggled to make my eyes work enough to watch him above me." She actually went temporarily blind in the orgy at the start of the book, and now she's again having vision problems from coming so hard...again, can this even actually happen, barring some sort of medical condition? And then Meph jams his cock in and he's so big and wide that it gives her "orgasm aftershocks of the oral sex".
Meph comments on how tight Anita is, and Micah assures him that "the first time is amazing" with Anita. I like to think this implies that everything afterward is so-so because then you realize she's really a one-trick pony...and that one trick is to lie down and play dead. Meph asks if she's always like this, Micah says she is after oral. Meph gets his cock as fully into the doomcrotch as he can and exclaims about how "God, I don't want to hurt her, but, God!" This makes me expect that awkwardly-named-God wererat to poke his head out from nowhere and go "Yes?". Micah assures Meph he won't hurt Anita, Anita tells him to fuck her, Meph asks what, she repeats it, Micah tells him to do it, Micah has a "so hard and so big" boner pressed against her back, Meph is "big and hard and inside me" so she screams and tries to claw but Micah pins her arms so she can't. Thanks, Micah, it's about time someone did this before she could scratch up another guy who didn't ask for it.
Meph starts pounding her vadge, and she feels Micah's body "grow wet, and I knew it was his own excitement lubricating against my back." So...Micah jizzed on her back? That's really gross to me, but I know some people are in to getting cummed on, and if it floats the boat of Anita and other readers there's not much I can objectively/fairly criticize. Anita tells Meph she's close, Micah tells Meph that when Anita comes Meph won't last, Meph says he believes him. Meph keeps dicking her while "Micah's body danced behind me as his body grew hard and wet against me." So...the second body means his dick, right? And how does a dick grow wet? That's what vaginas do. Maybe he jizzed on her again? I don't know. Then she comes, the word "spilled" is used, Micah pins her arms again, the word "spilled" gets used again, Meph comes, Micah comes, Anita cries out a lot...may I remind you of her "Screaming, so girl" comment?
They all kind of collapse on each other, Asher cries out, and Anita turns just in time to watch him and Nathaniel come too. Meph gasps out the word "Devil" and this time I can understand why Micah asks "What?". Meph says "Anita...asked what to call me...Family calls me Devil." So you want her to cry out your family's nickname for you during sex. That seems a little weird to me, but then again only my family calls me by my middle name, and therefore it has a lot of intimacy attached to it for me and I'll let serious romantic partners call me by it as a show of closeness, so I guess I can't really throw that stone here.
Anita says "I know Mephistopheles is the devil in the play, but why is it your nickname?" BECAUSE IT'S THE DEVIL IN THE PLAY? SERIOUSLY. SAME CHARACTER, 1/3 OF THE SYLLABLES! But, no, turns out there's a story there. See, Meph--er, I mean, Devil has a twin sister named Good Angel (Good and Bad Angels both occur in the play, so I guess there's a speaking part that's just called Good Angel) and when Devil was little he asked what his full name meant and his mother told him it was the devil in the play and his sister said "I'm the Angel, and you're the Devil" and it stuck. It's true that, as he says, "Almost anything is better than Mephistopheles" but I think the whole idea is stupid and Jake's master really needs to be slapped for inflicting this Marlowe theme on what seems to be half the gold weretiger population. Between Requiem, Wicked, Truth, and this, I think vampires should be banned from being allowed to name themselves or anyone else.
"So your twin sister is Angel and you're Devil?" Yes, Anita, he just said that. She asks if it gave him "a complex of some kind as a kid?" and he asks if she's asking if they lived up to their names, she says yes, he asks if she's asking if he's the evil twin, she says yes, and then his eyes get "all serious" as he answers "You better hope not."
I HOPE SO! I HOPE THIS IS A SIGN THAT EVERYTHING THEY WORRIED ABOUT HIM WAS FOR GOOD REASON AND HE IS GOING TO SCREW SHIT UP FOR THEM NOW THAT THEY'VE GOTTEN HIM ALL BONDED UP AND STUFF! I mean, I know that won't happen, but....sigh. At least we got the sex done and out of the way, right?
In other news...
New rat! My sister is moving, so she gave me Sid, Ratsputin's former cagemate. He has a lump/scab on his nose that seems to be an infection so we'll be giving him antibiotics for that. He also already gets along with Miss Blatz <3
GOOD NEWS: Sid and Ratsputin got along in the bathtub! At first Sid was really weird, like aggressively friendly...he kept herding Ratsputin with his body and basically forcing him to cuddle...but by the end they were just hanging side by side and Ratsputin was bruxing! I was able to carry them together back down to their cages. BAD NEWS: Ratsputin's penis was just covered today in gelatinous blood (like menstrual lining almost) and I'm going to try and find out if the antibiotic I used for him (which is almost out) is on the market.
BULLET, CHAPTER 43
Anita says she normally has trouble getting naked in front of a stranger but Meph is just so comfortable with all of this (well...wereanimals are comfortable with nudity, remember?) that she can't be uncomfortable around him. "If he honestly had as few hangups as it seemed, he'd be damn near refreshing." As opposed to the rest of your harem, none of whom seem to have any hangups about nudity or sex? Oh, wait, I think means personality hangups in general...don't worry, Anita, none of the new harem members you've collected since NiC have really had any personality, let alone enough for flaws.
Meph takes his clothes off and goes down on Asher and Anita talks about how some people just go down on others like a duty or chore but Meph clearly enjoys it because clearly he must have a texture fetish as Anita has emphasized again how much he's after that. "He sucked, rolled, lipped, kissed, and just enjoyed everything he could do with Asher." He stops to tell Asher that "You taste close." Is that something you can actually taste? Precum, I guess, that's a thing, right? Meph then asks why the others are just watching. YES, MEPH, STOP NOW TO CHAT, I'M SURE THAT'S *EXACTLY* WHAT ASHER WANTS JUST AS HE'S ABOUT TO COME. Nathaniel says he likes to watch, Anita says she wanted to watch Asher's reactions, and Micah said that he knew Anita and Nathaniel wanted to watch. Meph, who at least keeps his hands on Asher's cock, says "Trade me" and both Micah and Anita ask "What?" like the idiots they are. Nathaniel, however, agrees to and goes over to Asher and Meph."I was beginning to get the idea that maybe Nathaniel was more comfortable with a lot of things than we were" NO SHIT, SHERLOCK, THE BONDAGE-OBSESSED NO-LIMITS FORMER-PROSTITUTE HAS FEWER LIMITS THAN SOMEONE WHO NEVER DOES ANYTHING EXCEPT ORAL AND HETERO-MISSIONARY? Like, is this even news? Wasn't there a whole sub-plot once about Nathaniel wanting Anita to go all dominatrix on him in ways she wasn't comfy with?
"Micah put me very firmly in front of his body" and instead of assuming he's going to bang her from behind while still watching the show like I figured, she goes on this paragraph-long inner monologue about...I'm not totally sure, actually, except I think she's saying he's okay with Nathaniel going to Asher just not so much with a strange man? Or that it's okay for Nathaniel to bang Anita with him but not a strange guy? Yeah I think that's it, since Meph is going to be joining them, but I don't really know, it's frankly indecipherable to me the way it's worded. I am also amused that the way he holds her "used my body as a happy shield." HAPPY SHIELD HAHAH WHAT? Meph is crawling over to Micah and Anita with a hard-on while "Nathaniel's mouth slid over Asher" OH MY GOD HE'S UNHINGED HIS JAW AND IS EATING ASHER WHOLE AAAH! "the sight of it tighten things low and hard in my body" I'm not surprised that Anita apparently has a penis, I guess, but I am a little shocked that she's turned out to be a vore fetishist, who knew!
She thinks about how she liked Meph blowing Asher but she likes Nathaniel blowing him even more and concludes that "It wasn't just watching men doing each other; it was watching the men I loved do each other." Even Anita's yaoi fetish is better and more pure and less slutty and more justified than yours, because it's about LOVE too, really!
Meph strokes her hips and tells her she's beautiful. Anita tells the reader for the umpteenth time that she's never been this intimate with a stranger without the ardeur (but of course it's still Not Slutty of her in this case too because she HAS too, guys, rememer?!) and Micah starts playing with her tits and Meph kisses her and she grinds against him. Then Meph "licked between my legs and it drew a small sound that Micah ate with his kisses." Not only did I imagine Micah literally eating a sound somehow, but Anita continuously says "between my legs" in this chapter to mean vagina and it keeps making me think of just literally the empty spot between two legs. It's a common metaphor/euphemism though, I believe, so that's probably as much me being literal-minded (as I often am) than anything else. So yeah, when Meph then "plunged his tongue between my legs" I just think of him licking the patch of mattress between her legs while she stares in bafflement.
Meph licks her "sweet spot" and she can feel herself getting close to coming while Micah keeps up the kissing and breastplay. she comes and "screamed my orgasm into Micah's mouth" which sounds so fucking awkward and weird. She feels Meph stop for a moment, then he sucks on her cunt some more and Micah asks if she's had enough. She taps her hand on the bed "which was one of our signals when we were rendered speecheless with orgasm" Can that really happen? Micah tells Meph she's done, Meph gets in "one last long lick" and Anita writhes against Micah and she can feel that he has a hard-on "and I wanted that between my legs. I so wanted that." IF I HAD GOTTEN A 'MOOD' FROM THIS AT ALL, THAT VERBAL TIC WOULD HAVE JUST KILLED IT. But then it's Meph who starts putting his dick against "my opening" instead. "I struggled to make my eyes work enough to watch him above me." She actually went temporarily blind in the orgy at the start of the book, and now she's again having vision problems from coming so hard...again, can this even actually happen, barring some sort of medical condition? And then Meph jams his cock in and he's so big and wide that it gives her "orgasm aftershocks of the oral sex".
Meph comments on how tight Anita is, and Micah assures him that "the first time is amazing" with Anita. I like to think this implies that everything afterward is so-so because then you realize she's really a one-trick pony...and that one trick is to lie down and play dead. Meph asks if she's always like this, Micah says she is after oral. Meph gets his cock as fully into the doomcrotch as he can and exclaims about how "God, I don't want to hurt her, but, God!" This makes me expect that awkwardly-named-God wererat to poke his head out from nowhere and go "Yes?". Micah assures Meph he won't hurt Anita, Anita tells him to fuck her, Meph asks what, she repeats it, Micah tells him to do it, Micah has a "so hard and so big" boner pressed against her back, Meph is "big and hard and inside me" so she screams and tries to claw but Micah pins her arms so she can't. Thanks, Micah, it's about time someone did this before she could scratch up another guy who didn't ask for it.
Meph starts pounding her vadge, and she feels Micah's body "grow wet, and I knew it was his own excitement lubricating against my back." So...Micah jizzed on her back? That's really gross to me, but I know some people are in to getting cummed on, and if it floats the boat of Anita and other readers there's not much I can objectively/fairly criticize. Anita tells Meph she's close, Micah tells Meph that when Anita comes Meph won't last, Meph says he believes him. Meph keeps dicking her while "Micah's body danced behind me as his body grew hard and wet against me." So...the second body means his dick, right? And how does a dick grow wet? That's what vaginas do. Maybe he jizzed on her again? I don't know. Then she comes, the word "spilled" is used, Micah pins her arms again, the word "spilled" gets used again, Meph comes, Micah comes, Anita cries out a lot...may I remind you of her "Screaming, so girl" comment?
They all kind of collapse on each other, Asher cries out, and Anita turns just in time to watch him and Nathaniel come too. Meph gasps out the word "Devil" and this time I can understand why Micah asks "What?". Meph says "Anita...asked what to call me...Family calls me Devil." So you want her to cry out your family's nickname for you during sex. That seems a little weird to me, but then again only my family calls me by my middle name, and therefore it has a lot of intimacy attached to it for me and I'll let serious romantic partners call me by it as a show of closeness, so I guess I can't really throw that stone here.
Anita says "I know Mephistopheles is the devil in the play, but why is it your nickname?" BECAUSE IT'S THE DEVIL IN THE PLAY? SERIOUSLY. SAME CHARACTER, 1/3 OF THE SYLLABLES! But, no, turns out there's a story there. See, Meph--er, I mean, Devil has a twin sister named Good Angel (Good and Bad Angels both occur in the play, so I guess there's a speaking part that's just called Good Angel) and when Devil was little he asked what his full name meant and his mother told him it was the devil in the play and his sister said "I'm the Angel, and you're the Devil" and it stuck. It's true that, as he says, "Almost anything is better than Mephistopheles" but I think the whole idea is stupid and Jake's master really needs to be slapped for inflicting this Marlowe theme on what seems to be half the gold weretiger population. Between Requiem, Wicked, Truth, and this, I think vampires should be banned from being allowed to name themselves or anyone else.
"So your twin sister is Angel and you're Devil?" Yes, Anita, he just said that. She asks if it gave him "a complex of some kind as a kid?" and he asks if she's asking if they lived up to their names, she says yes, he asks if she's asking if he's the evil twin, she says yes, and then his eyes get "all serious" as he answers "You better hope not."
I HOPE SO! I HOPE THIS IS A SIGN THAT EVERYTHING THEY WORRIED ABOUT HIM WAS FOR GOOD REASON AND HE IS GOING TO SCREW SHIT UP FOR THEM NOW THAT THEY'VE GOTTEN HIM ALL BONDED UP AND STUFF! I mean, I know that won't happen, but....sigh. At least we got the sex done and out of the way, right?
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Date: 2013-07-02 11:55 pm (UTC)5. Like a limp noodle down a hallway.
6. What the fuck? I don't even get like that and I'm chronically sexually frustrated, and deprived.
8. Wander will grin at him and comment how it's the name of a manga demon (Blue Exorcist), too.
9. Eh... I read the Amazon flogging. He's not even like... he's... it's... I don't want to put spoilers on here, but they're on the comments for last chapter if you go look? XD; But yeah. Damian is still pretty much the most independent of the sweeties, and I'm pretty sure that's because he's so adverse to being anywhere near the ardeur
which is coming back to bite him in the ass post-Affliction it seemsso... yeah.